Poor Imp

I don't have anything particularly pointed to say. It reminded me of Cake. Have you ever heard...? Like "Building a Religion" in tone and rythm - which worked. Good imagery. ...

You can always write what the character didn't do . You know how it is when you sleep (and didn't inted to) - things distance and then you wake and ...

...Well, I have to say I rather liked the story - it came out deceptively prosaic (pardon the pun); but it had a snap to it. I liked the characters. ...

D'you know...you bewildered me. Yes, totally involving...and um, good...and and I don't speak ...l337? Or is it... Forget it. I thought you were Nate for minute. :lol: :shock:

But I suppose I should be leaning more towards original if I ever want to write an actual book. Ah well...I had sort of a fanfiction phase too. It is ...

Generally, the rule is pick the forum you want it in/it fits in most closely, and only post it there. Too many things could go cross-genre, :shock: and then we'd ...

Wow. That's great. You're not on by any chance, are you? I wouldn't know - I don't really watch or read much about CSI... Anyways, you've come just in time- ...

:lol: You are a writer, no doubt about it - paragraphs for introduction! Anyhow, welcome to YWS. I'm Imp. (There's this shpiel the welcomers are s'posed go...) You can check ...

Agreed.

Hey Jay (sorry - rhymes)! Welcome to YWS. You might want to check out the FAQ. As to points, they're for posting. In other words, you gain points for participating ...

Animal? Rather than human? No thanks. -Tov --- Is philosophy worth pursuing?(Is suffering assuaged by knowledge?)

...Though it's not necessarily responsible use of freedom to be an ---hole.

(all innocence here) Ah. How? -Tov --- Is there a God in the world who cares for his creation? No God? Or was there a creator who skipped off to ...

That was a fun read - I loved the voice of the character; it was distinct. I've just got a few comments. But whenever I answered a question she’d respond ...

Firstly, welcome to the site! YWS is a pretty pleasant place all around - though watch out for the random raving rants (critiques). Just kidding. :D I have a lot ...